tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2243038441168928039.post136502360753863910..comments2009-05-24T17:47:25.523-07:00Comments on The Hobo with a Focus: Listen to LondonHobo with a focushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04146476568852368754noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2243038441168928039.post-49370096974218121672009-05-24T00:38:54.969-07:002009-05-24T00:38:54.969-07:00Nicely done, I especially like the beginning. Be ...Nicely done, I especially like the beginning. Be sure to self edit before posting. There are a couple of misspelled words, and periods in spots they aren't supposed to be. What rule was that on Scully's list? I can't remember, but I know it was there.<br /><br />You do a great job of weaving your personality into the story -- which is what travel writing is all about. It's about using yourself as the drive to your narrative. Good work.Ryan Parkhursthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16386771139507421900noreply@blogger.com